Our previous blog post – How to stop long-scrolling websites looking too samey – gave you the key to
differentiating your brand: copy. But getting it right takes more than just a cheeky
colloquialism. We’ve picked out five brands whose web copy puts
them a cut above.
Evernote
Evernote is a great little
app that functions as a kind of collaborative to-do list. Its copy is razor
sharp. As soon as you land on the page, you’re hit with the key benefit –
Remember Everything. Instead of bombarding you with features and bells and
whistles, it simply paints a picture of a world with Evernote. And in just 15
words, the subheader establishes the need
for the product, the solution to
that need and how the product will
provide that solution. All in all: concise and compelling.
Good copy is tight. Airbnb
manages to do a lot in just two words. First-time users might be hesitant to
stray from the quality of service guaranteed by traditional hotels. ‘Welcome
Home’ does two things:
- Solves this objection by connecting its service to the safe environment of the user’s home
- Differentiates itself from traditional hotels unable to offer the same degree of personal service
And while bonus points are
awarded for the mesmerising silent videos playing in the background, the design
itself is functionally equivalent to every other long-scrolling website. It’s
the copy that makes the difference.
Deliveroo
Featuring just one button
emblazoned with the words ‘FIND FOOD’, Deliveroo doesn’t mess about. Avoiding
the obvious ‘Click here’, they’ve found copy that visualises the experience of
using the product. This website demonstrates one of the underappreciated truths
of brand tone of voice – it doesn’t have to be outlandish to work. Keeping the
header copy simple and to-the-point, Deliveroo conveys a great benefit without
making a song and dance about it.
Honest Brew
Craft beer retailer Honest
Brew have worked hard to cultivate the kind of straight-talking, upfront
tone that befits the ‘honesty’ their brand promises. Again, the standout
element here is the button copy. ‘Sign me up’ and ‘Still not sold’ inject some
personality using the same colloquial, conversational tone found on the rest of
the site. Other brands might trot out the standard ‘Sign up’ and ‘Find out
more’. It may sound trivial, but it’s these subtle changes that bring a brand’s
copy to life.
Unbounce
As you might expect from a company that makes a living building landing pages, Unbounce has got this one spot on. The site can be navigated using nothing but the scroll bar, but why even do that if the copy isn’t compelling? So it’s a pleasure to find the copy tight, to the point and full of active language – Build, publish, test, optimize. By the time you’re halfway down the page, you know the benefits of the service, who it’s aimed at and how it works. Good stuff.
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