Monday 21 May 2012

Ten deadly copywriting sins: part one


According to the Christian faith – and the movie, Se7en – there are seven deadly sins. But when it comes to copywriting, there are even more to look out for. In the first half of a two-part special edition post, we reveal five sins you might want to avoid if you want to make it to communications heaven.

1. Obscuring your message with jargon
In the excellent ‘A bullfighter’s guide’, the author describes jargon as ‘the foundation of obscurity’. He’s right. Jargon might be a shortcut for those in the know. But for your customers who aren’t hip to the lingo, it can obscure your copy’s message – leaving them frustrated and your message lost. The answer? Speak in English, goddammit. Go through your copy and remove anything you’d have to explain to your mum. Or your friends.